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YAAAAYYY!!! CRITIQUE PLEASE :D by PokemonForeverFan YAAAAYYY!!! CRITIQUE PLEASE :D by PokemonForeverFan
Amg <3 <3 <3
If you guys know the app Monster Kingdom...
Well, this kid called PiplupGokuLover [or just Piplup] is close to 11 years old. And she saw my dA... and then Piplup wanted to learn art... And I had a lame tutorial thing, a 2 hour long join.me on shading, with examples.
And she drew me this Felixu... She's not old enough for a dA yet, so I'm submitting it xD
Felixu is a monster from Monster Kingdom. And he's really good. Or I say that because I'm biased, because it's my favorite monster.

But anyways, she was really really sweet and drew this for me. And she has talent. Look at the one I made in May: [link] <--It sucks

Please critique this little guy for my student/kind of/!
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AGLtaria Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Critique time!

:star:Okay, let's start with the good news.

I like the face, especially how the little tooth sticks out. It makes it look adorable and fierce at the same time. Shading is nicely done as well.

You could try using a thinner brush to add more details and try to clean up your brush strokes.The tail is slightly awkward and you could add more shading to it.

Rating: :star::star::star::star:
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PokemonForeverFan Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you ;w;
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AGLtaria Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem! :D

Is this PFF or Piplup?
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PokemonForeverFan Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha, Piplup doesn't know my account password.
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AGLtaria Nov 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
XD
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iamafishy Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, I can't wait for her to get a dA!
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PokemonForeverFan Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah :la:
Just 2 years and 1 month...? ;u;
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